Showing posts with label Narrative Video. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Narrative Video. Show all posts

Friday, 25 April 2014

Evaluation


I think it can be quite clearly seen that the video was produced in a rush, and far from the standard of films previously produced.

The key area that I feel threw everything into chaos was the initial idea; or lack thereof at the beginning. Until Carly joined our group, Alice and I struggled to devise a concept that we were both happy with and felt could be achieved. Because Carly joined the group at a very late stage, with very little time left until deadline, we were very pushed for time, and thus did not work to a high standard. However, it would not have been unfair, in my opinion, to have gone ahead with any idea Alice and I had agreed on if Carly had not approved, nor had any creative say. As it turns out, it is because of her that we had a finished product, the idea for the story being entirely hers.

Planning is always stressful, even more so when you have a time constraint like that which we ended up working with. Because of this, a lot of planning and forethought was completely left or forgotten about as we concentrated on getting the film produced. We did plan out the whole film verbally, discussing as we did the shots we were after, locations, angles et al. It’s unfortunate that we didn’t write it down whilst discussing it, as more often than not, what was discussed was forgotten about or disregarded.

I do feel though that the film has some strengths. We were blessed to have two talented actors in the shapes of Billy and Kira, without whom there would be no film. Some of the camerawork is also rather impressive in my opinion; Carly and myself both kept looking for an interesting shot to film whilst filming the scene. The times and conditions under which we filmed led to some very unexpected, and previously unconsidered, angles and opportunities, which of course we were quick to utilise and making the film as strong as possible. Some of the night shots, particularly Billy underneath the street lamp, are prime examples of this.

In the end, the film has gained some positive feedback. A lot of people have admired the story being divided in parts, with the montage and speech scenes clearly dividing things up and showing key elements in a way that otherwise would have gone on for too long. The camerawork has also been praised for its use of angles and positioning.

If the chance arose to repeat this project, an idea would certainly have been set upon sooner, with a lot more planning taking place to ensure that the final product was not rushed in any way. I feel, perhaps, that some additional supporting characters may have added some life to film; something that would have been considered if more actors and actresses had been available.

With And Without You Script

Written by Carly Rose Wilson, with contributions from the crew.

Storyboards









Storyboards by Alice-Anne Bull

Tuesday, 1 April 2014

Weddings Across The Ocean

Weddings Across The Atlantic:
Four Weddings and a Funeral (1994) vs. My Big Fat Greek Wedding (2002)
The aim of this report is to critically analyse and compare two romance-comedy films and how their production, distribution and exhibition affected the response from their target audience and critics alike. The primary focus is comparing how Four Weddings, a British-made film by ‘Working Title,’ and Greek Wedding, from the State’s ‘HBO Studios,’ differenced in their successes or otherwise.  Whilst ‘Four Weddings and a Funeral’ is primarily a romantic film with some elements of comedy entwined with its storyline, ‘My Big Fat Greek Wedding’ is much more a comedic film set around an overly-exaggerated romantic theme. For the lead actors, Hugh Grant (Four Weddings) and Nia Vardalos (Greek Wedding), these are the films that they are arguably most known for, both winning an award due their respective films success.

 ‘Greek Wedding’ had a rather unusual beginning. Starting off as 45-minute monologue in Chicago, ‘My Big Fat Greek Wedding’ was originally a stage show written by and starring Nia Vardalos back in 1997. The story was based on Vardalos’ own life and experiences, having married a non-Greek man herself. The show sold out most nights, and was even seen by various Hollywood A-listers such as Tom Hanks. This led to her meeting with various executives with the intention of a film being produced, but inevitably changes were requested – and changes that Vardalos was none-too happy to agree with.


However, two months after the play’s initial run ended, Tom Hanks’ production company – Playtone – got in touch and expressed interest in producing ‘Greek Wedding’ as a film to Vardalos’ vision (as well as remounting the play for 1998.) To add the cherry on top, they also offered the lead role to Ms Vardalos. Hanks was noted as saying “That actually brings a huge amount of integrity to the piece, because it’s Nia’s version of her own life and her own experience.”

‘Four Weddings,’ on the other hand, was a completely new and original idea, but like ‘Greek Wedding’ was also based on a real-life experience by the screenwriter - whilst in attendance at a friend’s wedding, Richard Curtis met a woman who wished to spend the night with him. He declined, making a decision he constantly regretted and thus drew off of to write his screenplay.


By writing ‘Four Weddings,’ Curtis is commonly said to have set the standards for the romantic comedy genre, indeed being reported as “for good or ill, Richard Curtis has been one of the most influential, profitable and talked about figures in British Comedy. As the scriptwriter of Four Weddings and a Funeral (1994), he helped to inaugurate a cycle – some might say a brand – of British romantic comedies with an aspiration for an intentional audience that included his own ‘Notting Hill’ (1999) and the self-directed ‘Love Actually’ (2003).”
I.Q. Hunter & Laraine Porter, British Comedy Cinema, 2002, Routledge, Oxon, PAGE 184
When it came to distributing the film, it opened in the USA on March 9 2004, before coming to the UK just over 2 months later on May 13, having opened in Canada, France and Australia in between.


This has become an apparent common practice, whereby “(in most cases) the UK distribution sector tends to take its lead from the US and British screens are dominated by films which have already proved to be hits across the Atlantic.” After proving a success in the United States “Four Weddings and a Funeral … was then advertised in the UK as ‘America’s No. 1 Smash Hit Comedy!’”
Robert Murphy, British Cinema of the 90s, 2000, BFI, London, PAGE 84/5
It’s unclear how many screens played Four Weddings and a Funeral throughout its run in either the United States or United Kingdom. However, on opening week in the states, it opened to just 5 theatres, earning a modest weekend gross of $138,486. By the start of May, it had spread to 1,064 theatres, and by the end of its run, had grossed $52,700,832. 3 days after its debut in the UK, Four Weddings had grossed £1,432,424. A mere month later, on June 19 2004, that figure had jumped considerably, then grossing £14,042,394 and continuing to £19,442,924 by July 19. By the end of its run in UK screens it had totalled £27,762,650, compared to America’s $52,700,832 final gross. The worldwide total came in at $244,100,000, with America’s final gross contributing to just over 20% of this figure.


Greek Wedding meanwhile was reported to have “opened only on 108 screens but slowly built up a following. One of its most successful earning periods occurred 37 weeks after release, when the film grossed $4,751,495 at the US box office & screen numbers had risen to 973.”
Tim Aller, Screen Finance, Volume 18, Issue 12, June 29 2005, P5, Hollywood now selling the anticipation of movie; Informa, London.
The film premiered in the USA on February 22 2002, but was not released aside from this until April 19 the same year, albeit limited to begin with as mentioned above before spreading its wings from August 2. It saw its UK debut from September 20, following its release in Turkey a couple of weeks beforehand.


Made on a budget of $5,000,000 (compared to Four Weddings $4,500,000 budget), My Big Fat Greek Wedding made a total gross of $368,744,044 worldwide, including a total  gross of $241,438,208 in the states alone, which stands to show just how popular the film was in America in contrast to the remaining countries it screened in. At its peak, Greek Wedding was screening on 2,016 screens in the USA, but just 350 in the UK.


Both films were fairly successful, but on the face of it, it would certainly seem that Four Weddings and a Funeral proved the more successful of the two. Its user rating on IMDb is a respectable 7.1 out of 10 – equal to 71% - and fares even better on Rotten Tomatoes.com with a 95% critic approval rating.


My Big Fat Greek Wedding scored considerably lower on both sites, winning a mere 6.6 out of 10 (=66%) on IMDb, and a slightly more impressive 76% on with the critics at Rotten Tomatoes.


With the high critic rating on Rotten Tomatoes, it is somewhat surprising, however, to find that both films are a mere 1% apart in their audience review scoring on the site. Four Weddings scored 74%, whilst Greek Wedding came in just below with 73%, 3% under its critic rating.
The formula and writing for the film could perhaps be regarded as its major let down.
“It's so predictable; take an honest guess and you'll probably be right on. The same goes with all the humour here: unoriginal and thoroughly predictable,” Comments one reviewer. “I'll give credit to the Windex joke for its initial sense of originality, but it occurs in dialogue so pervasively that it seems to lose its spark almost instantly.

Alexander D, Reviewer, Rotten Tomatoes, June 29 2011
http://www.rottentomatoes.com/m/my_big_fat_greek_wedding/reviews/?type=user

The offensiveness toward Vardalos’ own heritage background seemed to be another main concern. “This film is as offensive toward the Greek community as it gets. Nia relied on throwing poop, nonstop, to her own heritage to keep us "entertained". Well, she failed miserable in my case. I have no idea how this film saw the light of day, or was ever nominated for an Oscar… the writers sought to discredit their own people in order to fill pages and act like inferior humans beings, saved by the wiser race. One word. Disgrace!


Despite this criticism, it rang a chord with some international viewers. “Now, I'm Italian and even I could relate to this Unorthodox Greek family. It's such a clever, yet simple way, of depicting the stereotypes of an overbearing, operatic, hysterical and out-of-this world Greek family.

Rocco C., Reviewer, Rotten Tomatoes, April 3 2013.

It would seem that the situation can be familiarised with people who have experienced it personally, but to others would come across being overly exaggerated – which, in the case of this film, it certainly could be – and thus offensive to the people it portrays.

Four Weddings and a Funeral gained more favourable reviews.
Besides the engaging romance found within its core, it also has a great sense of humour that works every time. Another terrific element is the cast and characters, featuring - among many other wonderful actors - Hugh Grant at the top of his talent.” Praises one reviewer.

CloudStrife84, Reviewer, Rotten Tomatoes, July 7 2007
http://www.rottentomatoes.com/m/four_weddings_and_a_funeral/reviews/?type=user

It’s the work of the director, Mike Newell, that juices this bit of contrivance that has Grant and MacDowell (whom you instantly surmise will be together by film's end) always brushing into one another, their friends ever intruding,” comments another.

Apeneck F, reviewer, Rotten Tomatoes, July 5 2007

However, it too received some criticism about the predictability of the story.
Yes it has a huge, wonderful cast and Richard Curtis is a delightful writer, however this movie is just boring and predictable from the start. You really don't have to watch the whole two hours of this movie in order to know where it’s going and what it’s about.”

FilmCrazy, Reviewer, Rotten Tomatoes, September 14 2007

In conclusion, it would seem that the success of a Romantic Comedy is all down to how the comedic aspect is portrayed within the film. A comedy aspect that is over-exaggerated and can be interpreted as derogative to a race, nation or similar would seem to fare less well than one that plays on more personal human relationships and the romance itself. The romance is what sells the film more, whilst comedy is included to support the story and throw some light hearted ‘slapstick’ moments in amongst it to keep the viewers entertained.

The comedy for My Big Fat Greek Wedding was heavily criticised, whilst the romance factor won over because “at the centre of all is Toula, who is clearly a Cinderella figure – vulnerable and misunderstood by those around her” and creates a character that can be familiarised and empathised with; “It is a first-person story, a woman’s story, and we care because we want her to be able to survive and, finally, thrive, combining her love and family, baklava and scotch.”

Andrew Horton; Screenwriting for a Global Market, Selling Your Scripts from Hollywood to Hong Kong; 2004; University Of California Press; California
http://books.google.co.uk/books?id=34xFIZNJ-EIC&pg=PA88&dq=my+big+fat+greek+wedding+marketing&hl=en&sa=X&ei=SuGqUrDYBK-10QXD2IDIBg&ved=0CFoQ6AEwBw#v=onepage&q=my%20big%20fat%20greek%20wedding%20marketing&f=false


 The glaring success of Four Weddings and a Funeral, particularly in the states, is why it is commonly remembered and referred to in rom-com film discussions, and why Greek Wedding is so often overlooked. That said, the latter film did receive a sequel in 2003, entitled ‘My Big Fat Greek Life.’

Friday, 31 January 2014

D/601/8826 LO3.3, 3.4; The Film

With & Without You
The Film


With all the footage logged, a rough edit was done and found to be 18 minutes in length. When filming, it became apparent that there would have to be some major cuts made to the film - we failed to realise the extent of the cutting required.

The main issue with cutting some shots was that it created a lot of continuity between those left that were crucial to the story. Thankfully, with some alternate angles and/or transitions these "joints" could be masked, and the final result is that which you see above.

Thursday, 30 January 2014

D/601/8826 LO1.1, 1.2, 1.3, 3.2, 3.4; Production & Roles

Roles

Whilst most roles were shared to allow one another to gain experience in different fields, each of us did claim a few roles as our own.
I took on the role of camera operator, being an area I am keen to develop my skills in and being an area I have most experience in. Given the time constraints, it also made sense that I adopted this role to save time.
I also took charge of editing the film being the most experienced of our group with using Final Cut Pro. As editor, I worked majoritarily under Carly, the visional-director. I edited the film into a basic shape, and Carly highlighted areas she thought required alternative shots, cutting, amending and so forth.

Locations

Rainham Station
Selected for its semi-rural feel, Rainham station is on the C2C Fenchurch Street to Grays line and sees only two trains an hour each direction, which allows for plenty of time to film in between. It is away from a main road so there would not be too much noise disturbance. The station supervisor was happy to allow us to film around the station providing we didn't enter station premises (as that required special permission for insurance purposes amongst other reasons); a condition we were more than happy to accept as we didn't have any shots that required filming on the station to begin with.




My Own Home
We had a scene to film of Olivia and Matt watching a film that would be included in the montage. My home was between two filming locations. As we were stopping for a costume change anyway, it made even more sense to take this opportunity to film here.



Bretton's Manor Park
The shots that were to close our opening montage would see Matt and Olivia in a (romantically stereotypical) sequence in a country park, in embraces and 'larking' about.




Slice Of Kiwi Coffee House
A shot that would also form part of the opening montage, permission was given to film a short scene in this Coffee Shop down the road from college ahead of its closing time.



Havering College
TV Studio
The opening of our film required a studio for Matt to photograph Olivia and her dance partner. The TV studio in college was the most ideal studio to use. Photography studios were too confined in space, and the dance studio had mirrors that would make positioning the camera tricky. The TV studio, however, wasn't overly spacious, and had a lighting rig that could be focused on the dance subjects. The blue screen also gave an ideal photographer's backdrop.




Carly's House / Street
The argument that ends our film was to occur at Olivia's house. Whilst my home was ideal for the short scene previously filmed, a more spacious location was required for the argument. We also filmed parts of the second montage, in which Olivia texts Matt, in Carly's room, which is much more suited to Olivia's character than any room in my home.





The Ardleigh & Dragon English Pub & Tai Restaurant
Matt's scenes in the second montage saw him in the company of his university friends on a celebratory night out. This pub just down the road from the college were very accommodating and allowed us to span 2 tables to film the required shots.



And It's A Wrap!

Cast
Billy Fyfe - Matt
Having each worked with Billy before, we knew that Billy is a competent actor who can portray a range of characters. Despite trouble previously getting in touch with him, we did get through in the end he agreed instantly to join the cast.

Kira Andrews - Olivia
Kira came highly recommended by Carly, having attended drama school together previously. Kira was available at short notice and, like Billy, extremely able when it came to portraying the character of Olivia.

Alice-Anne Bull - Emma
Alice has acted before in my previous short films. Emma was only a minor part and was originally set to be played by another recommendation of Carly's. Unfortunately, this actor had to cancel at short notice, and Alice stepped in to play the part so we could stay on schedule.

Carly Wilson - Alex
Carly has been to theatre school in the past, the result of which has seen her partake in stage shows and film work prior to joining our course. She was cast as Alex primarily for her acting ability, but also because it meant we could stick to schedule.

Daniel Lindsay - Olivia's Dance Partner
This was the smallest part in the film, but we knew we had to choose someone with clear dance talent. Kira suggested him and when asked, he accepted the role.

Costumes
Costumes were left to the decisions of the actors, although some pointers were given.









D/601/8826 LO 1.3, 3.5, 3.1, 3.4: Pre-production

Where It All Changed... Again...

The setbacks mentioned in the previous post occurred at the end of the term. Whilst Alice and I had intended to work on the film over Christmas, with the intention to commence shooting upon return in the new year, I encountered serious health issues over the Christmas period which prevented me from continuing any work until returning on 9 January 2014. At the same time, fellow classmate, Carly Wilson, was experiencing troubles in her own team and ultimately left; we were all too happy to welcome her into our group.

Carly brought with her a fresh set of ideas and suggestions, which both Alice and I agreed had much better potential than our own previous ideas. Whilst we each had input, the idea on the whole was Carly's, and so she was entrusted with writing the script.

The New Idea

The film, which is titled 'With & Without You', is a realistic romance film centred around a pair of young lovers whose relationship begins at college during a photography project; Matt (lead male) being the photographer and Olivia (lead female) being the subject of his assignment.

Opening with Olivia in dance, we cut back and forth to Matt, who is can be clearly seen to be infatuated with her. After finishing his photography, the two begin chatting, which leads into a montage of their relationship across the weeks/months than ensue, finishing up at a rail station where Matt says goodbye to Olivia as he departs for University - the two are attempting a long distance relationship.

We cut to near the end of the term, and Olivia is visibly troubled by the distance, finding it hard to cope without her love present, but also feels like there's something he isn't telling her. She consults a friend, who is confident that there is nothing to worry about.

We then cut to Matt at University. Finishing off an assignment with one of his classmates, Alex, he strikes up a conversation about how much he is looking forward to seeing Olivia again, having not met up since he left for pastures new. He is swiftly reminded, however, an assignment yet to be completed which will detain him for a further week and cause him to miss his girlfriend's show that he was hoping to attend. Alex comforts him, assuring him that he will be back with his love within a week.

Another montage begins - Olivia and Matt and texting one another. She is annoyed that Matt was unable to attend her performance. But what is troubling her ever more is his friend Alex, who she finds out is female and not a male as she had previously believed. Despite his girlfriend's worries, Matt is enjoying his last night in the presence of his university buddies at a pub, drinking. He fails to realise the state Olivia is in as he assures her that it is only 'farewell drinks' and he will be back home the following week. Olivia has had enough, and seven nights pass by, each as troubling as the last.
Finally, Matt returns. He and Olivia reunite at the same spot on which they were separated some months before. But whilst Matt is delighted to be back with the love of his life, Olivia's emotions are quite different.

Back at Olivia's house, the two are arguing. Olivia is trying to explain how hurt she feels, and that when she needed him most, Matt wasn't there for her. Matt defends by stressing how hard university life is, with assignments, work and more restricting his free time. But ultimately, Olivia says she feels they should break up. Matt is wounded, and storms out leaving his bag behind.
Olivia rummages through the bag in hope of finding something that will convince her she made the right decision and finds a USB with her name on that Matt was going to give to her. On this is a montage of photos that Matt has arranged of the couple's time together, the last of which is him holding up a large sign with 'I LOVE YOU' written on it. Olivia is moved by this, and darts into the night to try and catch up with Matt.

Matt has made it quite some distance, but Olivia catches up. She stops, leaving a good few feet between them, as they look at one another, waiting for someone to make the first move...

And then we end.

Production Schedule

Day
Scene
Actors & Crew
Time




Thursday



Monday




Tuesday
Photography Classroom


Montage, Park, Train
Station, Home.



Dance Studio, College, Pub.
Billy Fyfe, Alice-Anne Bull, Owen Hayward & Carly Wilson

Billy Fyfe, Kira Andrews, Alice-Anne Bull, Owen Hayward & Carly Wilson

Billy Fyfe, Kira Andrews, Daniel Lindsay, Danielle Fearne, Alice-Anne Bull, Owen Hayward  & Carly Wilson

3:30 – 6pm



   11am Onwards


  
  
   TBC
Created by Carly Wilson; Agreed by Owen Hayward and Alice-Anne Bull

Friday, 13 December 2013

Report: Weddings Across The Atlantic - Notes

Attached is a file containing notes for my film-comparison report - Four Weddings And A Funeral & My Big Fat Greek Wedding. The report should critically compare the success of the two films based on production, distribution and exhibition.

Friday, 6 December 2013

Plans & Plots

Starting Point...

The initial plan was for Alice and I to produce a follow up to a short film we created earlier in 2013. The film would follow on 3-4 years after where 'Notes' left off, showing how Elisha and James' relationship has gone horribly wrong. 

Original Short Film 'Notes' 

James has become distant and cold towards his woman, and unbeknownst to her has started seeing another woman. Torn by the thought of losing her man, Elisha attempts to win him over again but to no avail. Sighting him with the other woman finally pushes her over the edge and Elisha plots to - and succeeds in - killing her cheating lover.


Unfortunately, we couldn't get ahold of our actor for James (Billy Fyfe) and whilst we could have recast the part to a new actor, it was agreed that the story for Notes didn't require a follow-up, and that to recast the part for James would potentially lose the charm of the original film.

Friday, 18 October 2013

Narrative Video Proposal

The Idea

Our initial idea is to produce a romance film that should cover at least one sub genre, being either comedy or horror. Combining the broad genre of romance with a sub genre should help us create a story that flows easier; romance on its own would prove too broad-a-genre to cover.


Our two films of choice to use as research references are:


Four Weddings & A Funeral

IMDB: "Over the course of five social occasions, a committed bachelor must consider the notion that he may have discovered love."

and


My Big Fat Greek Wedding

IMDB: "A young Greek woman falls in love with a non-Greek and struggles to get her family to accept him while she comes to terms with her heritage and cultural identity.'

Researching these films should help me understand the differences in production and distribution of British and American rom-com films, including how they were marketed upon their release.